This is for End Run . If you don't know what that's all about, I suggest you start by checking out the group.
Anyways, I'm glad this is over. Maybe if I did a comic like everyone else, I would have had an easier time. But I just had to go and do something totally different. It's a bit much for only the second round, but whatever.
Though the main character in this story is Vincent, part of it is also told through his Pokemon. This is because it's hard to relate to a character who acts like a major douchebag all the time. Note that any text that is darker brown and italicized is "Pokemon speech", which cannot be understood by humans (this disclaimer was necessary since I'll probably get points taken off if I didn't mention it). Dittos can talk only when they have transformed into a human.
Sorry, no music or sound this time. I don't have enough time for music looping and sound editing. And I promise I'll do a better job on the backgrounds (and title screen) in the future.
Kanto Air Force - Moltres Squadron
Vincent - [link]
Nebraska - [link]
Chris - [link]
Geno - [link]
Charles - [link]
Leopold - [link]
Miriam - [link]
General Hitchins - [link]
Mia - [link]
Chuck - [link]
Kanto Navy -
Carl - [link]
Riiiiiight, because a Pokémon riding on the wing would be a lot more logical than a belt of bullets in the wing. . .
Its a nice story, just a little unrealistic, than again, when is Pokémon realistic?
I love your characters and plots.
(especially that old guy with the dragon flute in your last one.)
I feel really sad for that poor ditto. :C hes such a sweet fellow, how can his trainer be such a jerk and not care?
(I couldnt help but giggle a bit at the last image, o.o ditto looked like sad chewed up gum on a sidewalk with a face. Does that make me awful?)
This was cute and interesting at the same time. I love the personalities of the characters in your story. :>
Amazing job on the animation!
For some reason i didnt manage to see the panel where ditto was supposed to fall or something, but nevertheless a great story c:
Thank you so much for drawing Chris and Al!! Including Litto and the plane too! I never really knew he was capable of being a leader of anything, I learned something surprising today :]
This was insanely well done. Gah.
Seriously, I think choosing not to do a comic was SO worth it: Your final product is soooo awesome! 8D
Weird, but I like the effort you've put into the story board.
Vincent's a really interesting character. I like him. :3
this is a really incredible entry. Not only did you pick a really interesting, if difficult, way to present it with flash, but it was well written, had great dialogue, was beautiful, engaging and just everything a good entry should be. Great job!
The only thing it's missing is a replay button. ^^
Vincent's character is something else, not caring about his pokemon, just caring about being on top. Very interesting! I really enjoyed it!
I was expecting great thing from everybody, but this is awesome! Excellent work!